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Monstrous Books => The Monstrous Library => Topic started by: sexywolfgirl on November 13, 2008, 11:17:37 AM
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Here are some of my poems. I hope you liike them.
This one I dedicated to my granny who died of cancer enjoy. :cry:
My Love
Oh, my love, I love you with all my heart
I forever hope we shall never part
We have been together for as long as I remember
Since we met all those years ago in December
We then got married on the fourth of July
On that night, we watched the fireworks fly
We then bought a wonderful home
A twelve acre farm where all of our horses roam
Then we had our daughter Sue
She has your eyes of blue
when she turned five, she met her friend Skye.
Together they went to elementary, middle, and high
She then went to college
While there, she gained much knowledge
A few years later, she called us with news
She was to marry Jerry, who could play the blues
We then went to the wedding
For months, we helped her with planning
She then gave birth to their daughter Aleu
You came down with this cancer when she turned two
I know it will be your time to go soon
When you do, I'll send you a red rose tied to a balloon
When you recieve it, think of me
For one day again, we shall become we
I wrote this one while I was bored in english last yr. *<:)
"Werewolf"
A full moon so bright, what a sight!
It's time to become a werewolf tonight
Time to get on all fours and start to howl,
and perhaps feast on an unsuspecting cow
I start to grow my hair, fangs, and claws
and in the distance I hear a crow caw
Now I release a grunt, and now I start my full moon hunt.
I'll post some more later. :-D :-D
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That's awesome christy. :-D
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thanx
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The Grandma one is really sad though, you can tell that you feel deeply about it all in that poem.
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these are good poems :-o
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lol. Thanks. I really needed to write "my love" when she died. It made me feel a lot better inside. i have another poem i want to put on here, but i'm debating on it.. It is about being molested. It isn't bad though. My dad thinks it makes him look worse thamn wat he really did. :oops: Do ya'll want me to post it?
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It's entirely up to you dear, & don't worry, we know your dad is a great guy. :-)
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ok, well here it is.
2001
My life was great, until 6 years ago when I was eight
Mom and Granny had went to town, and that had left me
And daddy at the house hanging around
Daddy took me to his room and stripped me bare
And then he started rubbing me right where you know where
When he finally stopped that mess, I managed to get dressed
When Mom and Granny got home from town
I told my mom what dad had done
And her expression became a horrified frown
She took me straight to granny''s house and while I repeated what I said,
My mom was crying and her face was solid red
Then they took me to see some cops,
And when I had finished repeating what I said
The cops just shook their heads, there were some toys lying around
And one cop said take something, and I took the 1st thing I found
A little darboard that was round
By the time they were done, it was twenty till one
Then mom told me dad was in jail, and when I heard that, I started to wail
One day when I got home, 6 months later
I was feeling up to biscuits and tators
I come around the corner and what did I see
My dad here standing and grinning at me I ran and hugged him like a curse,
And then I heard something that was worse,
Mom and dad were getting divorced
Christy
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Oh darn, I realise now what an idiot that last post makes me look like. T_T
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lol. it doesn't sound stupid...much. lol *<:)
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I'm sorry, I got you confused with someone else in that post of mine. T_T
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that's ok. I 4give u. now, :focus:tell me wat u think of "2001"
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I liked 2001 very much. I think it's very brave of you to write such a poem. I wish I could write poetry, but my words just don't come out that way.
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I think it's very brave also, that type of stuff can either cripple you for life, or make you stronger. I love how you chose to make something out of it. :-)
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I think it's very brave also, that type of stuff can either cripple you for life, or make you stronger. I love how you chose to make something out of it. :-)
To be truthful, after I moved down here to waycross and left him in griffin, I started thinking and at 1st I thought I shouldn't ever see him again. Then I decided that I want to see him. I wish I could see him, but unless his probation officer lets him off early, i won't be able to see him until I'm 18! I still talk to him on the phone though. He regrets doing wat he did, and he knows I forgave him. 0:)
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Awww hun, good for you. Healing is always hard. :-)
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Healing from my granny's death was far harder than healing from wat my dad did, but eventually I conquered. :-)
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Good for you hun. You dont diserve hurt. you diserve happiness of every kind. And if you ever need me to help in any way I will help. And I think Terra would say the same since we are your friends. So anything and I will do as in my power to help.
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Yep, we are here for you. :-)
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Thanx. U guys are the best!!! Same goes for my other friends on here. U know who u r.
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Got anymore awesome poetry? :-D
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She says she wont be on till after thanksgiving.
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Awww, darn, I got that PM. :cry:
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I am able to be on today for a little while. Yes I have more poetry. I'll try to post them if I go over to princessofthenight's house. :-) Btw, my mom spent the night at the hospital last night b/c they discovered that she had had a heart attck a few days ago without realizing it. I'm worried about her b/c that's not the only thing wrong with her. I'm not sure wat else the doctor said. I'm hoping that she recovers b4 I come back to school.
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Same here hun.....I dont want you to be sad.
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New Poetry Alert!!!!!!!
"Fear"
As bright as day
as dark as night
nothing shalll ever fill me with fright
a witch's cackle, a werewolf howl, nor
even a hooting owl. A bat's screech,
a zombie's moan, why should I fear of
being alone?
"Prom Night"
Sitting in a chair
combing my hair
get in my dress
my mascara's a mess
put on my shoes
do what I do
Get into the limosine
this night will be a dream!
Sit with Chris
hope for a kiss
Get to the school
without looking like a fool
Dance all night
feels like flight
time to go
end of show
he gives me a kiss
this night I will miss
This is my latest
"I'm Done"
You've done me wrong
I know the truth
Found the other girl's thong
I didn't even need a sleuth
Found her number in your cell
Here's your phone,
now go to hell
I'm going home
You're not getting a 2nd chance
you've blown it
I'm not in a lovesick trance
and you should've known it
It's over. i'm done
you've had your fun
screw her near the fireplace
I"M DONE!!!!
Right now I am working on two others, but I'm a little stuck. Once I'm done with them, they will be on here.
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Wow, absolutely awesome hun!!! O.O
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thanx. my spanish teacher read "i'm done"and she said that it sounds like adult content. LOL
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Lol, doesn't look like it to me. ^.^
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Me neither. Even though it is funny that she said that. The poetry that I'm working on is sorta like vampire poems this time. One sounds similiar like the "werewolf" one. I just have a litttle writers block on them right now. <^>
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Good job as always, hon!
Don't worry about the writer's block, it'll come back to you! Try not to think about it so hard. It comes easier if you don't try to force the words. :-)
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"My temper"
I wish I knew why it is
that I can't control my temper
and everyone knows this
I always regret what I say
My temper scares me so,
I'm always like go away!,
& sometimes I wish I could go
I yell, I scream
I'm a b****, or so it seems
After I yell,
I see that I sound like a demon from hell.
I'll be glad when my temper I can cease
and my kindness I can increase.myself"
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Oh, I love that poem hun. I have a bad temper, too, but I have never lost my temper and hurt someone I care about. I wonder why? :?
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b/c u can control urs better. I get my temper from my dad's side of the family. German of course. Btw, I have inspirations about new poems. I am sure that I will be able to have a lot more by the time I get back on. I'll be back around january 7th or so. Depends. :wink:
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Okay hun, I'll be waiting in anticipation. :-)
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Your topics are fine, though your grammar, syntax, punctuation, and word choice/pacing need a good deal of work. These are things that will come with time and practice. Keep up the good work.
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Ok, here is another poem. This one is what my best friend is going through. I will have more soon, and they will be about vampires this time.
"I'm giving up hope"
I've had a rough day, it's time for bed
So much has happened that I wish I was dead
I tire of school, and the rest of my life'
Come on someone, just give me the knife!
Dad cheated on mom with my cousin
though it is true, I wish it wasn't
Mom found a guy in California to be her next possible groom
She wants to move up there around May, but i think it's too soon
She is always talking to him online
but I've got friends i can talk to, so i'm fine
I know It's not right for me to think like this
there are things I need to change, or so I wish
my cousin is now due with twins
life with my dad I could never make amends
when my dad left, mom got fired and now we're almost broke
I know my dad don't care, so i'm giving up hope
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"A Vampire's Life"
I walk through the graveyard all alone
beneath my feet lie bodies and bones
Tombstones here, tombstones there
a foggy mist fills the night air
being a vamp isn't so bad
but it is the end of your mortal life you once had
you need to drink blood for your immortal life
be careful though, you may cut through your victim like a knife
Your new strength and speed will be a blast
You'll be super strong and super fast
living a vampire's life may be rough
but you'll be okay, I know you're tough enough
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I used the gothic poem generator to create this poem on how I am without lust or passion.
Devoid of Love
the night falls with a silent sigh, cold and alone are we.
the understanding for which you lust
flares once, then dies,
smothered by a velvet ebon nothingness.
all hope must surely perish.
your heart desires no more.
how could you not understand?
our dark emotions surround us, crying,
save us from ourselves.
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All brilliant my dear, keep up the good work!
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All brilliant my dear, keep up the good work!
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Thank u. g2g now.
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Your poems are nice. I see room for improvement but I believe you'll be fine on your own if you keep on your current path. Keep writing, hon, and sorry it took so long to reply. I lost the link.
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I wrote more poems. Check these ouut. "My Wolf Life" has the same sound as "werewolf"
"My wolf Life"
Howling at the full moon fills me with delight
hearing me howl fills others with fright
I feel my power surging through my veins
and in the distance I hearing the passing trains
I stand on the hill, feeling the need to howl and sing
being a powerful wolf spirit is such a glorious thing
"I would"
My friends are all gone
though I did no wrong
I grew my fangs and went pale
and they ran out the door fast as hell
This is what I've always dread
my friends being scared of a friend who is dead
If I didn't need it anymore, if I could
I"d stop drinking blood, I really would
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"without Love"
I'm without love this Valentine's Day year
my soul is alone and without my soulmate I fear
I desire love and passion in my life soon
I hate being alone on nights of a full moon
Whether my soulmate is mortal or immortal
Whether on earth or in another world through a portal
I'll be happy with my soulmate for sure
for it will be a love that is wholesome and pure
passion and lust is something I wamnt some of
but for now I'm without love.
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"depressed"
I feeling depressed, nothing helps me,
I can't see my dad, and I'm as miserable as can be
he took a lie detector test,
he failed it because he got mad at a question, but passed the rest
I can't take it anymore
my feelings are bad and my body is sore
I had a breakdown during class
and went to the counselor real fast
I ended up going to counseling
and I then stayed home sleeping peacefully
Now I'm depressed, and I don't know what to do
hopefully I can get help before I'm through
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Nice piece. Your style is developing nicely. It reminds me of my one friend. It's so rare. Keep writing, hon. :-)
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Thanx. I that last one just happened on feb.20th last week :-(. Hopefully things will get better in my life though, like for example, my b-day is march 2nd. :-)
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Ok, I haven't had much free time to write, but I am sure that once my writing juices get going again, this thread will be alive again. 0:)
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I have a bunch from old contests when I was younger - let me dig them up :wink:
Through My Eyes
Through my eyes, I see the trees,
The trees that sway and drop their leaves.
I watch the colors as they sway,
And see the changes everyday.
My world flies as leaves blow through,
And I see the life - I feel it too.
Through my eyes, I see the deer,
The deer so graced, so quiet, so sheer.
I watch her drink and gaze this way,
And regret when she runs away.
My world leaps with the deer as it bounds,
And I follow - hardly making sounds.
Through my eyes, I see the fox,
The fox that ducks and weaves across.
I watch him dart through the woodland,
And hope to see him again so grand.
My world turns while watching him go,
And I see him hiding - keeping low.
Through my eyes, I see the birds,
The birds that sing and makes themselves heard.
I watch them flutter about with ease,
And wish I could follow them past the trees.
My world stops for their sweet song,
And I imagine - for this I long.
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Choose to Take the Right Path
When at once you come to a fork in the road,
Put yourself in thinking mode.
Look to your left and look to your right,
Decide carefully, for you just might…
Take the narrow and steep path
That winds around a mountain track.
Up to highness, up to greatness-
You can soar above the ages.
Or walk the broad path of regret and sorrow,
Keep walking on - on to the morrow.
Walk the easy path that leads to a sorrowful ending
Keep on walking without your heart mending.
Choose to take the narrow ledge-
The way that might have a challenging edge.
I would rather tread through the rocky soil,
than waltz along as if I were royal.
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good job. Maybe u should start your own poetry thread on here and we can have a poetry competition. hehe :wink:
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lol - you guys would win - this is just some old stuff I dug up from a couple of years ago.
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well, a competition b/t the 2 of us might make an interesting thread. We could post our two favs of each of our works, and then let the others vote. :-)
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I would read them and vote on them.
Go for it, it would be intruiging.
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i don't know if I'm going to or not. I might. The school yr is about to end. I don't have a computer at home. :lol:
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haha - wasting life away on the computer at school when you should be working; sounds familiar.