Monstrous
Monstrous Books => The Monstrous Library => Topic started by: Demon_Detective_Leo on June 22, 2009, 12:09:32 AM
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The topic says it all. I made these without trying for my school project I said in a diffrent thread, good luck in finding what I said, and I thought I would share them and hear what people thought.
A hunter waits
The prey comes into view
Silence disappears
Lithium Flowers
Float from the heavens to earth
It collects over death
Trust A key to man
Easily taken away
A lie steals the trust
Death, the last challenge
Its not to be feared or lost
Paradise follows
Time A measurement
Ticks away even when eyes close
Time is only taken
Man living earth child
Born from womb of mother earth
Mother calls with death
Love feeling of man
It drives many to do great actions
Some drown without love
Life is a cycle
Birth, Child, Adulthood, then Death
It always moves on
I wrote these while listening to a playlist on youtube for Ghost in the shell SAC Solid State Society Soundtrack.
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Not bad, detective, not bad at all. They have some grim melancholy which is quite rare in mainstream culture, and they definitely ARE nighttime creations.
You should check out my poetry thread, as we are both nighttime poets, eh.
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I have read your poems and that was a little bit of a reason why I posted mine.
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I have read your poems and that was a little bit of a reason why I posted mine.
WHAT should that mean, detective?
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Its a complement. You posted your's so i got a bit of a back bone so I posted mine as well because yours were going well.
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Its a complement. You posted your's so i got a bit of a back bone so I posted mine as well because yours were going well.
Then comment them and tell me what you liked about them! In the Poems of Noir, not here.
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They gave me a back bone to forget what people can say and just chance it. I like them in general but I can't point out detail for detail.
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They gave me a back bone to forget what people can say and just chance it. I like them in general but I can't point out detail for detail.
DO IT. please? feed my poor little ego...
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Normaly, I say starve the ego, it builds charactar sometimes if done right. This time, I'll try to feed it
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Normaly, I say starve the ego, it builds charactar sometimes if done right. This time, I'll try to feed it
And - thank you.
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No problem
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No problem
Detective Jake.
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Yes?
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Yes?
Sounds good.
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It does. Do you have a title that you liked to be called by?
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It does. Do you have a title that you liked to be called by?
I like Devinoir, or just Devi, just fine. What I am is beyond titles - JK.
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Nice one.
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Nice one.
tnx
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No problem.
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No problem.
No probemo, eh, hermano.