Author Topic: Their bodies lay in a shopping cart.  (Read 3553 times)

Spade

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Re: Their bodies lay in a shopping cart.
« Reply #15 on: February 19, 2009, 09:18:20 AM »
Demon Slut Vomit

Demon sluts vomit in the mouths of lost souls
The acids melt their minds and death turns them to moles

All the blood turns black and slowly crawls on the ground
Taking life of its own as it walks without sound

Sprouting limbs and wearing the skin of victims forever dead
Raping kids and unscrewing the lids that hold the thoughts in their head

Digesting their brain as they become insane because of the evil beast
They lay in their beds, their minds are now dead because of the evil feast

This demon plague shall spread through our land
Holding the mindless like a ship not manned

You can all try but you can not stop it
For you all have swallowed demon slut vomit.

Amaya

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Re: Their bodies lay in a shopping cart.
« Reply #16 on: February 19, 2009, 02:44:34 PM »
Nice piece. I like the imagery. Keep writing, hon.  :-)

Mr. Kreepy
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Re: Their bodies lay in a shopping cart.
« Reply #17 on: February 26, 2009, 05:52:31 PM »
What I find most amusing is that people can post stuff like this and get praised for it, but as soon as I do the same I get railed on by some childish narcissist with an undeserved sense of entitlement.
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