Author Topic: Sexywolfgirl's aka christy's Poetry corner  (Read 8070 times)

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Re: Sexywolfgirl's aka christy's Poetry corner
« Reply #30 on: December 02, 2008, 11:29:42 AM »
Good job as always, hon!

Don't worry about the writer's block, it'll come back to you! Try not to think about it so hard. It comes easier if you don't try to force the words.  :-)

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Re: Sexywolfgirl's aka christy's Poetry corner
« Reply #31 on: December 02, 2008, 11:32:45 AM »
"My temper"
I wish I knew why it is
that I can't control my temper
and everyone knows this
I always regret what I say
My temper scares me so,
I'm always like go away!,
& sometimes I wish I could go
I yell, I scream
I'm a b****, or so it seems
After I yell,
I see that I sound like a demon from hell.
I'll be glad when my temper I can cease
and my kindness I can increase.
myself"
« Last Edit: December 12, 2008, 11:38:09 AM by sexywolfgirl »
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« Reply #32 on: December 15, 2008, 05:22:03 PM »
Oh, I love that poem hun. I have a bad temper, too, but I have never lost my temper and hurt someone I care about. I wonder why? :?
Gabriel, "Don't kill yourself for it would crush my angelic heart. I love you for who you are and I'm glad I met you. :]"

"I'm going to break him, and there will be blood."

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Re: Sexywolfgirl's aka christy's Poetry corner
« Reply #33 on: December 16, 2008, 11:10:41 AM »
b/c u can control urs better. I get my temper from my dad's side of the family. German of course. Btw, I have inspirations about new poems. I am sure that I will be able to have a lot more by the time I get back on. I'll be back around january 7th or so. Depends. :wink:
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« Reply #34 on: December 16, 2008, 01:35:41 PM »
Okay hun, I'll be waiting in anticipation. :-)
Gabriel, "Don't kill yourself for it would crush my angelic heart. I love you for who you are and I'm glad I met you. :]"

"I'm going to break him, and there will be blood."

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« Reply #35 on: December 27, 2008, 06:28:11 PM »
Your topics are fine, though your grammar, syntax, punctuation, and word choice/pacing need a good deal of work. These are things that will come with time and practice. Keep up the good work.

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« Reply #36 on: January 07, 2009, 11:15:54 AM »
Ok, here is another poem. This one is what my best friend is going through. I will have more soon, and they will be about vampires this time.

"I'm giving up hope"
I've had a rough day, it's time for bed
So much has happened that I wish I was dead
I tire of school, and the rest of my life'
Come on someone, just give me the knife!
Dad cheated on mom with my cousin
though it is true, I wish it wasn't
Mom found a guy in California to be her next possible groom
She wants to move up there around May, but i think it's too soon
She is always talking to him online
but I've got friends i can talk to, so i'm fine
I know It's not right for me to think like this
there are things I need to change, or so I wish
my cousin is now due with twins
life with my dad I could never make amends
when my dad left, mom got fired and now we're almost broke
I know my dad don't care, so i'm giving up hope
« Last Edit: January 08, 2009, 11:08:51 AM by sexywolfgirl »
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« Reply #37 on: January 09, 2009, 11:56:37 AM »
"A Vampire's Life"
I walk through the graveyard all alone
beneath my feet lie bodies and bones
Tombstones here, tombstones there
a foggy mist fills the night air
being a vamp isn't so bad
but it is the end of your mortal life you once had
you need to drink blood for your immortal life
be careful though, you may cut through your victim like a knife
Your new strength and speed will be a blast
You'll be super strong and super fast
living a vampire's life may be rough
but you'll be okay, I know you're tough enough
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« Reply #38 on: January 22, 2009, 11:59:37 AM »
I used the gothic poem generator to create this poem on how I am without lust or passion.

Devoid of Love

the night falls with a silent sigh, cold and alone are we.
the understanding for which you lust
flares once, then dies,
smothered by a velvet ebon nothingness.
all hope must surely perish.

your heart desires no more.
how could you not understand?
our dark emotions surround us, crying,
save us from ourselves.
Insanity is a fun state of mind. I can amuse myself and have my friends wanting to get me a straight jacket and a padded room.

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« Reply #39 on: January 22, 2009, 12:10:43 PM »
All brilliant my dear, keep up the good work!

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« Reply #40 on: January 22, 2009, 12:15:59 PM »
All brilliant my dear, keep up the good work!

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Thank u. g2g now.
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« Reply #41 on: January 22, 2009, 12:20:24 PM »
Your poems are nice. I see room for improvement but I believe you'll be fine on your own if you keep on your current path. Keep writing, hon, and sorry it took so long to reply. I lost the link.

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« Reply #42 on: January 23, 2009, 11:13:05 AM »
I wrote more poems. Check these ouut. "My Wolf Life" has the same sound as "werewolf"

"My wolf Life"

Howling at the full moon fills me with delight
hearing me howl fills others with fright
I feel my power surging through my veins
and in the distance I hearing the passing trains
I stand on the hill, feeling the need to howl and sing
being a powerful wolf spirit is such a glorious thing


"I would"

My friends are all gone
though I did no wrong
I grew my fangs and went pale
and they ran out the door fast as hell
This is what I've always dread
my friends being scared of a friend who is dead
If I didn't need it anymore, if I could
I"d stop drinking blood, I really would
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« Reply #43 on: January 26, 2009, 11:32:20 AM »
"without Love"

I'm without love this Valentine's Day year
my soul is alone and without my soulmate I fear
I desire love and passion in my life soon
I hate being alone on nights of a full moon
Whether my soulmate is mortal or immortal
Whether on earth or in another world through a portal
I'll be happy with my soulmate for sure
for it will be a love that is wholesome and pure
passion and lust is something I wamnt some of
but for now I'm without love.
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« Reply #44 on: February 23, 2009, 11:25:48 AM »
"depressed"

I feeling depressed, nothing helps me,
I can't see my dad, and I'm as miserable as can be
he took a lie detector test,
he failed it because he got mad at a question, but passed the rest
I can't take it anymore
my feelings are bad and my body is sore
I had a breakdown during class
and went to the counselor real fast
I ended up going to counseling
and I then stayed home sleeping peacefully
Now I'm depressed, and I don't know what to do
hopefully I can get help before I'm through
« Last Edit: February 23, 2009, 11:55:17 AM by sexywolfgirl »
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