Sorry Oni, i forgot you posted in here as well. My mind loses it sometimes.
And its unporfeesional to make remarks which can happen to anyone. And as you have stated, I am a detective with guns.PS - the next chapter will be a while getting in, I have been fighting with myself if I should write a Biohazard / Resident Evil fanfiction like SD Pin has for each of the games.
Two things, one, why does it need one?Two, the main love intrest is out of town for the detective in the book, what do you want me to do, have a flashback of when he had a love scene with her but before either of them confessed their love? *starts kicking ideas around*
Devinor, Ill throw my rule book at you to learn from *throws a wadded up paper ball at you* Rule one, when writing, and it is original works, write it for yourself. If others like it, two thumbs up and a pat on the back *smiles a bit* I am a pain sometimes.
I could prbably wing it hopefully well enough but at this point it is not needed. I write was is needed for the story and it isn't needed at this point.