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lockesk

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Re: poem
« Reply #30 on: August 09, 2009, 11:48:38 AM »
Tattered wings
There is perversion at play
a cursed dimension
i am stuck in this sickening world
A cycle of which i want no part
death, love, lost, a new
life is brought  and lies are lied

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Re: poem
« Reply #31 on: August 09, 2009, 09:55:39 PM »
keep going this one isn't really finished. Wait for inspiration and continue with this one.
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« Reply #32 on: August 10, 2009, 02:45:11 PM »
Yes,but there are more demensions they operate than what you know. Its a double-edged sword.War is wrong yet if we didn't have soldiers to fight you would surely be dead. Ever read anne frank's diary? What happened to her in the end without military on her side...
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Re: poem
« Reply #33 on: August 10, 2009, 05:37:32 PM »
Andrea, if there were no wars, no urge to wage wars, THEN we all would be safe. Now I really appreciate the hard work a soldier does, but if there was no need for them, we would be living in a much more happier place.
Saying that, I wanna add that I'm thinking about going to the Navi.
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Re: poem
« Reply #34 on: August 10, 2009, 05:41:01 PM »
Yeah but you and I both know that there cannot be total peace. Our country is ruled by hate.
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Re: poem
« Reply #35 on: August 10, 2009, 05:44:34 PM »
You mean the US? It's not ruled by hatred, Andrea. It's ruled by indifference.
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« Reply #36 on: August 10, 2009, 06:56:32 PM »
War=death
Greed=hate
Hate=indifference
I'd say it's all connected...at least in the cruel games of war.
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« Reply #37 on: August 10, 2009, 08:21:24 PM »
But how does hate=indifference? and how does greed=hate? greed can bring hate, but that's not always the case and indifference is the middle ground between liking something or hating it. But you're right, there can't be true peace and war does create lots of those... unwanted feelings... or is caused by them.. or both. And without war, if thee were total peace, the government would most likely not stay in power for long. The people trust in their government because it's protecting them. So once again, a double-edged sword. We could use some time off all the fighting going on all over the place these days, though >.>

@lockesk: I like your work, keep it up! But yeah, I'd go with what Devinoir said and finish it up when you've got the inspiration :wink:
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« Reply #38 on: August 10, 2009, 08:40:20 PM »
I'd say all of those things lead to eachother and are all ultimately connected...greed for money from oil leads to war which is hatred because we kill one another and we are all indifferent on both sides about how we as a country solve problems yet do nothing to stop it and the killing continues....Once again,just my opinion....

Oh yeah and seriously finish that good stuff!
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Re: poem
« Reply #39 on: August 10, 2009, 09:46:51 PM »
Indifference has nothing to do with hatred. They're on opposite sides, actually.
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« Reply #40 on: August 10, 2009, 09:50:19 PM »
Oh ok I see your point...
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« Reply #41 on: August 10, 2009, 10:27:17 PM »
Indifference has nothing to do with hatred. They're on opposite sides, actually.

I agree.

But now I understand the whole greed -> war -> hatred. It makes sense. I see what you mean by hatred leading to indifference, Andrea. I'd say they kind of coexist within different parts of society, though. You've got the hatred for the opposing side, yet most are rather indifferent to the fighting itself. Most would rather see the happy world they're hoping for rather than the one they're really living in.
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Re: poem
« Reply #42 on: August 10, 2009, 10:29:11 PM »
Ah,so you see what I was trying to illustrate KubeSix? Yes! Its a vicious circle and one undoubtedly engulfs the other.
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Re: poem
« Reply #43 on: August 11, 2009, 07:58:43 AM »
Yeah i kinda just stopped with that one maybe ill finish it later. I would have to say your whole little argument was pretty amusing though *<:)

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« Reply #44 on: August 11, 2009, 10:53:02 AM »
Yeah i kinda just stopped with that one maybe ill finish it later. I would have to say your whole little argument was pretty amusing though *<:)

Hope you enjoyed the show :-P
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