Author Topic: These Binding Chains  (Read 10809 times)

Lupus
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Re: These Binding Chains
« Reply #120 on: November 16, 2009, 02:16:01 PM »
interesting... i like how the topic of each poem varies , makes each one seem unique , rather than posts on other sites where they just churn out stuff on the same topic. The variaton of rhyme in each poem is nice - i like it , helps to draw attention to parts of the poems - all i all i like it alot , your poems seem to be geniune , which in my opinion makes them powerful.

p.s. - if i seem to be too critical i dont mean it - i too write things , only i dont post them... lets just say i dont think theyre good enough ( i am quite a perfectionist)

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Re: These Binding Chains
« Reply #121 on: November 16, 2009, 09:30:00 PM »
Thanks Lupus.
I REALLY appreciate constructive criticism.
Dish it out man,I'm ready.
I appreciate you taking the time to check out my work.
Rather it be random thoughts coming out of my mind or poetry I work on for months.
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Lupus
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Re: These Binding Chains
« Reply #122 on: November 17, 2009, 09:48:12 AM »
not a problem

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Re: These Binding Chains
« Reply #123 on: November 25, 2009, 09:07:19 AM »
 Like I said... Very nice. I really liked that one.
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