interesting... i like how the topic of each poem varies , makes each one seem unique , rather than posts on other sites where they just churn out stuff on the same topic. The variaton of rhyme in each poem is nice - i like it , helps to draw attention to parts of the poems - all i all i like it alot , your poems seem to be geniune , which in my opinion makes them powerful.
p.s. - if i seem to be too critical i dont mean it - i too write things , only i dont post them... lets just say i dont think theyre good enough ( i am quite a perfectionist)
