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A war story (song)
« on: September 11, 2009, 02:20:05 AM »
Gun shots, cries of pain
Yet I live, to see another day
My friends fall, they all fall before me
I will avenge them, just you wait and see
The things Iíve seen, will haunt me all my days
And I remember the screams, every time it rains.
During the night, I live it all
Why wasnít I taken, Instead of all of them.

(chorus)

War and fighting, what do they solve
They cause more problems, than they do resolve
But itís my life, and itís all I know
So pray for my soul, just before I go

Daddy why you going back, please donít go again
What if you never come back I wonít see you again
I promise you my daughter, Iíll come back for you
I swear to you that I'm one thing youíll never lose
Do you promise daddy, do you really promise,
Yes my darling little girl, I really truly promise,
So give me hugs n kisses, for daddy walks out the door
Iím off to fight in a country, Iíve never heard of before

(Chorus)

Now Iím lying in a hospital bed, half my bodyís gone
I should have jumped away from the bomb, right before it blown
Iím only barely alive, the only thing keeping me in this world
Is the promise I made, made to my baby girl
So I get flown back, back to my home
Even thought in my body, I have more metal than bone
She sees me arrive, and runs out and sees
Tears fill her eyes, as she runs to greet me.

You kept your promise daddy you came back to me.
For the First TIme,
Im Losing Control,
And I Like It,
Freedom Feels Like The Noose is Gone

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Re: A war story (song)
« Reply #1 on: September 11, 2009, 11:25:49 AM »
This is good :-o I love it! (Especially the chorus)
Seek not beauty in battle. Seek not beauty in death. Consider not your own life. If you wish to protect that which must be protected, then strike when your opponent's back is turned.

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Re: A war story (song)
« Reply #2 on: September 11, 2009, 04:19:58 PM »
hehehe thanks...ive actually wrote music for it and performed it at a concert with hilltop hoods (dunno if you know of them) because we won battle of the bands
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And I Like It,
Freedom Feels Like The Noose is Gone

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Re: A war story (song)
« Reply #3 on: September 11, 2009, 05:40:48 PM »
  This is a very comendable show of creative ability Ravenfreefall, more and more you show that you are worth of redemtion, keep it up, and hope to see more from you in the future.  Have any other songs?  Something that would be awsome would be if you had a recording to share, I would love to hear this as a live version.  I am a soldier and songs which deal with our lot in life appeal to me.
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Re: A war story (song)
« Reply #4 on: September 13, 2009, 05:48:02 PM »
I have many many more songs...only problem is my usb that i saved them on has been stolen...ill rocover them and put them on...And as for live version i shall try to get my band together and record one and post it somewhere to be heard...
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Freedom Feels Like The Noose is Gone

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Re: A war story (song)
« Reply #5 on: September 13, 2009, 05:48:53 PM »
Oh i have also posted another song on here by the name of SHadows In The Darkness.... just fyi
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Re: A war story (song)
« Reply #6 on: September 17, 2009, 02:31:14 PM »
I will look for it, and look forward to your bands performance here on monstrous.
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