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onishadowolf

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Poems(I think they are)
« on: September 20, 2009, 09:36:40 PM »
 Darkness surrounds me. I hear a voice, it beckons me. I go to it, the sweet sounds of the siren compel me closer. My next step catches nothing but air, I'm falling now. I hear the siren laughing now, as I fall through the fathomless pitts of darkness. Lead astray again, but the darkness wraps around me whispers to me. The darkness doesn't leave me, or lead me astray.
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Re: Poems(I think they are)
« Reply #1 on: September 20, 2009, 09:37:20 PM »
So many desires, all can be fulfilled. Except one, which isn't even a desire, but a need. One to never be fulfilled, the lips of the forsaken. Will never be touched again, pain is nothing compared to emptiness.
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Re: Poems(I think they are)
« Reply #2 on: September 20, 2009, 09:40:04 PM »
I look into her eyes, as her cool lips touch mine. I fall into the ocean of her eyes, as her lips become heated with passion. Only to have the spell broken, by the cold steel of the blade thrust into my chest. As darkness surrounds me, those eyes hold me spellbound again.
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Re: Poems(I think they are)
« Reply #3 on: September 20, 2009, 09:41:24 PM »
One day I awoke to this masquerade.
With everyone wearing masks in this giant parade.
I look in the mirror and see a crumbling facade.
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Re: Poems(I think they are)
« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2009, 01:16:28 PM »
Hey you really like that last line don't you? Sounds great I've seen you do it before it fits quite well in this poem
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Re: Poems(I think they are)
« Reply #5 on: September 21, 2009, 03:06:53 PM »
I really like that last one oni. Good work.
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Re: Poems(I think they are)
« Reply #6 on: September 21, 2009, 09:07:03 PM »
Thanks ya'll. I wasn't sure about making a topic for these and others.
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Re: Poems(I think they are)
« Reply #7 on: September 22, 2009, 07:14:54 PM »
I look into her eyes, as her cool lips touch mine. I fall into the ocean of her eyes, as her lips become heated with passion. Only to have the spell broken, by the cold steel of the blade thrust into my chest. As darkness surrounds me, those eyes hold me spellbound again.

 This was far and away my favorite. Very good.

 Some of the poems feel like they are unfinished, though. Are they, or is it just me?
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Re: Poems(I think they are)
« Reply #8 on: September 22, 2009, 10:23:17 PM »
These are the types that you write down in the middle of the night. So, yeah some seem unfinished because the thought wasn't completed.
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Re: Poems(I think they are)
« Reply #9 on: September 23, 2009, 05:26:09 AM »
 Well then complete them man! :-P
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