The Poems of Noir

[IsAbElLa]

i am  so freaking bored i am so sorry lol and i feel fat i just ate a piece of pizza and i am stuffed

[Andrea Warfare]

You ate 1 piece of pizza and feel stuffed?

[Devinoir]

Guys..... wrong thread for that, okay? Please.. there are people who check this thread who are very important to me, and I don't think feeling fat and eating pizza and having conversation about that belongs here.. sorry for being snappy, but all complaints on any other thread I hold, okay? Preferrably Idle.

[Kadesh]

 Thank you, Dev... you saved me from doing it. I've been wanting to, but I'm trying to behave.

Anywho... Have you ever seriously thought about trying to get published?? You really should look into it. REALLY.

[Devinoir]

I have thought about it a few times, and I am thinking about finding a way to do that. I mean, everyone at my college who has read them says they're pretty dark (apparently they haven't read your works) and most of them liked them. So maybe there is hope for an audience.

[Kadesh]

 Gee, thanks Dev. I honestly don't think they're that dark. It's more of one of the sides of human emotion that people are reluctant to admit they feel. Especially in 'Ace of Spades'. You caught me completely off guard with that ending and I never even saw it coming. That's rare for me, lol. But how many people will admit to sitting there thinking about doing some sort of bodily harm to someone? Few. And few are honest enough to write the way you do. It's good stuff. Really good.

[IsAbElLa]

SORRY  WELL I THINK U SHOULD....I WOULS BUY THEM loL

[Devinoir]

Isabel

A diamond hanging -
Between her breasts,
I held it,
Making sure she felt
The lust that pulsed through my tentative grasp,
And I gulped -
As I watched her black eyes turn their sinister gaze
To mine,
And I hoped she knew what I felt,
And I knew she felt not what I did,
But in the black void  of her gaze
I saw the comfort of a lie,
A sweet refuge of a dream
To believe that she is mine.
I held on to it, I did.
I wanted her, and wanted bad,
She held my hand, and felt the rhythm
Of the lust inside my veins,
And she saw all the pain
I held inside my own black gaze..
My devil of a lover, her devious smile
Across her heart-shaped face
The murderer of all I was
And all I ever will be
But hers..

[onishadowolf]

Girls with heart shaped faces are the ones that ruin you, at least in my experince that is.
Their faces are heart shaped to symbolize that they can shred your heart up.

[Andrea Warfare]

Haha that's me!

[Devinoir]

They do it, Oni, that's true,
A heart of a woman is a dastardly lie
That makes us squirm and beg and die.

[Kadesh]

 I couldn't tell you what shape my face is... it's just there.  The poem.... it speaks volumes and volumes. A picture couldn't scream as loudly. The emotions you go through in that poem are transferred to the reader. I've read poems and understood what the emotion was supposed to be, and recognized it within myself, but I've never been forced to feel things like you do with your poetry.




Get.








Published.

[Devinoir]

Wish I could.. for now you're my only readers.

[Kadesh]

 And a faithful reader I'll be. 

[Andrea Warfare]

As I