These Binding Chains

[Lupus]

interesting... i like how the topic of each poem varies , makes each one seem unique , rather than posts on other sites where they just churn out stuff on the same topic. The variaton of rhyme in each poem is nice - i like it , helps to draw attention to parts of the poems - all i all i like it alot , your poems seem to be geniune , which in my opinion makes them powerful.

p.s. - if i seem to be too critical i dont mean it - i too write things , only i dont post them... lets just say i dont think theyre good enough ( i am quite a perfectionist)

[Andrea Warfare]

Thanks Lupus.
I REALLY appreciate constructive criticism.
Dish it out man,I'm ready.
I appreciate you taking the time to check out my work.
Rather it be random thoughts coming out of my mind or poetry I work on for months.

[Lupus]

not a problem

[Kadesh]

 Like I said... Very nice. I really liked that one.