Writing from instinct observation.

[Kadesh]

 I really liked the end of that one. Interesting way of looking at it. Very insightful.

[Tybalt]

Thank you very much, wasn't so sure about that poem. I think I will have several new poems until I get back to my inner peace.

[Kadesh]

 Peace is simply a state of mind. Use it to your advantage.

[Tybalt]

I still have your bite marks.
You mark me, you curse me, damn it!
I still have your bite marks.
I've been waiting to be rid of you, to long damn it!
I still have your bite marks.
I still have your memories, you still haunt me, damn it!
I still have your bite marks.
I don't back down to no one but for you I gave, damn it!
I still have your bite marks.
Give me all the pain, you gave me your pain, damn it!
I still have your bite marks.
The bite marks of a common whore, temporary, damn it!
I still have your bite marks.
The bite marks of the one I loved, temporary, damn it!
I still have your bite marks.
Damn it, they still won't go away!
Damn it, they sure as hell don't seem temporary.


Damn it, Tiger's bite marks won't go away. (Btw, thats my kitty if any one didn't know.)

[Kadesh]

 Good stuff. I love that you wrote about the kitty, lol. If I may point out one thing... "to long, damn it"  should be "too long, damn it". Wrong 'too', but still great stuff.

[Tybalt]

I like how I made it sound like a ex girl friend poem.

[Regina Terra]

Awww, your kitty cat bit you? That's so cute!!! I like it when I play with my cat, & he gets mad so he tries to grab my hand in his mouth, he never bites down though, lol.

That is an excellent poem.

[Kadesh]

I like how I made it sound like a ex girl friend poem.

Yeah... so do I. That was a great twist to throw in.