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Devinoir:
Okay so I decided to finally open my own poetry thread. Feel free to criticize and please tell me what you think. I'm starting out with my first poem written in English (I mostly write in Russian)



Endless


Thoughts go through
Right through your mind,
Sometimes you think of suicide,
Thoughts go through
And they come back..

I loved you once
I'll love again
Love's a game that never ends,
You don't seem to find your way,
But it's okay..

You hate you cry
You fall and die,
You ask yourself for reasons why
You've trapped yourself inside your lies
But that just happens in your mind.

I find you gone
And yet again
I find that it just never ends,
So close your eyes, give me your hand -
You know that we'll all turn to sand.

We fail we fall, we lose it all
But in the end it's us alone
So I can live this life again
So many times
That I forget..

Devinoir:
And another one, the second one, written about two months ago:


Far Behind


I've left my sunshine far behind,
Now I'm sorry I'm not blind,
I know I'm gonna die someday,
But that day's too far away.
Cause in the dark I've lost my mind,
But - just at first -I merely cried,
Then there came my old friend pain,
Then I never was the same.
You can laugh - it's kind of fun,
The way at first I missed the sun,
Then it all just washed away,
My life became a painful game.
I've left my sunshine far behind,
It's been long since I am blind,
So long since I've lost my soul,
Just too long to care at all.

rave phillaphia:
awe thats so sad  :cry:

Moloch:
Keep trying, Devi. The more you read, the more you'll write. The more you write, the better your writing will become - though what you have posted is still pretty good.

Devinoir:

--- Quote from: Moloch on June 10, 2009, 03:25:42 PM ---Keep trying, Devi. The more you read, the more you'll write. The more you write, the better your writing will become - though what you have posted is still pretty good.

--- End quote ---

Thank you on that. What poets do you suggest? Besides yourself?

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