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Please do!  :-D (I might start a poetry thread myself, who knows...)

Sweet as work bro. Loved the ending, was wondering what it was building up to. Really strong structure as well, worked like a charm.

i liked the whole thing although i dident expect the ending

 I really liked that. I might suggest you remove a couple unnecessary words just to make it stronger and the meaning more clear, but it's still good stuffz.  :-D

yeah, I see what you mean,

thats the first poem I ever wrote without being forced :-D

I wrote one in english class once about smoking weed.....
the teacher was anoid as hell, but I got an A anyway.
along with a note to my mom, but I dont smoke any more.
and if I did I wouldnt tell :-D


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