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Lupus:
interesting... i like how the topic of each poem varies , makes each one seem unique , rather than posts on other sites where they just churn out stuff on the same topic. The variaton of rhyme in each poem is nice - i like it , helps to draw attention to parts of the poems - all i all i like it alot , your poems seem to be geniune , which in my opinion makes them powerful.

p.s. - if i seem to be too critical i dont mean it - i too write things , only i dont post them... lets just say i dont think theyre good enough ( i am quite a perfectionist)

Andrea Warfare:
Thanks Lupus.
I REALLY appreciate constructive criticism.
Dish it out man,I'm ready.
I appreciate you taking the time to check out my work.
Rather it be random thoughts coming out of my mind or poetry I work on for months.

Lupus:
not a problem

Kadesh:
 Like I said... Very nice. I really liked that one.

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