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These Binding Chains
Andrea Warfare:
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Natural Order
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Stormy Waters
Serene Pond
Weeping Willow
Whispering Fawn
Secret Sands
Setting Sun
Evolution undergone
Tadpole to frog
Teradactyl to crane
Forlorn raptor to strike again
Adam and Eve
Anaconda and mouse
Preying Mantis and her mate
The Dominatrix seals his fate
Centipede orange glow
Circling Vultures seen from below
Fearful Mole wrapped in night
Survival of the fittest chose to spite
Amoeba One celled thing
Asexual doesn't need a fling
Amazon consists of a species ring
Circle of Life as in the Lion King
Kadesh:
The first two were my favorite by far, but you're right, they aren't very reader friendly. Try breaking them up and checking for correct punctuation. That will help with it a LOT. Trust me. I've written something before and not been happy with it. Then, after hitting enter a couple times and breaking it up... BAM! Perfect. (to me anyway. Just because someone criticizes or critiques your work, doesn't mean there's anything 'wrong' with it. A work can be perfect in the artists eyes and complete chaos to the world.)
Andrea Warfare:
Umm actually this shouldn't even be up I requested for it all to be removed.These are the rough drafts they are much more reader friendly,however,I don't want them up for the world to see. Can someone move these as well/delete?Thanx Kadesh
Kadesh:
You made the topic... you can delete it. Just look for the button at the bottom of the page when you're viewing this. And if they aren't supposed to be seen... why did you ask me to have a look in my poetry thread??
Andrea Warfare:
I don't see the button and I don't recall asking you to have a looksee but hey its ok whatever. If you look in the editors room you'll find all the finished works I've done.If ya wanna take a look at my work I'd suggest that you look at the finished products,:-)
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