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KubeSix:
Heh, I can see a few have created their own poetry threads, so might as well make mine. I write as a hobby, but I haven't written any poetry for a year or two, so let's see what I can do :wink:

Red.
A crimson veil over my vision,
As I lay in bed,
Venturing far from reason.

The color of love,
Like a blessing from above.
But is it truly love that I seek?
Emotions reaching their peak.

Rage.
It is blood that I see.
What is the meaning of this rampage?
It seems giving in is the key.

[Missing ending?]

Heh, so that was me rambling... I just wrote that in like two minutes and ran out of creativity for the ending verse... :-P I've never shown my poetry to anyone before now, so please tell me what you think of it!

Ryobi:
Nice linking, now all I can see is red, great!

But seems to jump around a bit? What does the last verse mean?

Andrea Warfare:
It starts off great but starts to ramble off a bit...finish it!!

KubeSix:
Haha, okay, I'll try to finish it tonight. And yeah, it does ramble off XD The last verse was supposed to be explained in the ending, but I stopped writing there, so... :-P

ravinclaw:
only took a couple minutes? Thats prety good I think, finish it though.

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