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KubeSix:
Will do. Only tonight, though, that's when my creative side comes out :-)

Andrea Warfare:

--- Quote from: KubeSix on August 02, 2009, 11:19:44 AM ---Haha, okay, I'll try to finish it tonight. And yeah, it does ramble off XD The last verse was supposed to be explained in the ending, but I stopped writing there, so... :-P

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Drink a bit and unleash the beast! Ha its funny,I can never write anything drunk  :doh:
Woah,that's great for just coming up withat that one the spot. Good Job!

KubeSix:

--- Quote from: Andrea Warfare on August 02, 2009, 04:36:41 PM ---
--- Quote from: KubeSix on August 02, 2009, 11:19:44 AM ---Haha, okay, I'll try to finish it tonight. And yeah, it does ramble off XD The last verse was supposed to be explained in the ending, but I stopped writing there, so... :-P

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Drink a bit and unleash the beast! Ha its funny,I can never write anything drunk  :doh:
Woah,that's great for just coming up withat that one the spot. Good Job!

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Thanks! ^_^ I might sneak a couple beers up to my room *looks over shoulder* :-P :-D

KubeSix:
Heh, alright, I made a V 2.0 for my poem, 'cause I've modified a few parts. Again, a 2-minute poem:

-----[ Red ]-----

Red.
A crimson veil over my vision,
As I lay in bed,
Venturing far from reason.

The color of Love,
The color of Anger.
Is it a blessing from Above,
Or a curse from Under?

Lust,
Rage.
Feelings that I must,
Send back to their cage.

So let me put on this mask,
Accept those lies I make up for the time being.
So in case someone asks,
It's in a bright, serene blue that I'm seeing.

Any better? :-P By the way, I said I would do it last night, but I forgot! XD

KubeSix:
Meaning: could've been better? Of course, the 2 minute thing meant it's not a final version, but I just can't seem to concentrate for too long, I always end up losing interest XD

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