Shadowling's poem.

[Shadowling]

Um... I wrote it.


   'What would you say'

What would you say,
if I told you
that I see
shadowy creatures late at night?
They crawl up the wall of my mind,
and stare down at me.
They walk on the street around me.
But you can't see them.
What would you say,
if I told you
I have to fight everyone around me,
because thier emotions are crushing mine
and I have to feel the world's misery?
and you can't feel it.
What do I say,
when you ask me,
what's wrong?
What am I supposed to say?
Do you have an answer?


   -Shadowling

[Zak Roy Yoballa]

An interesting prespective.  Makes one think a tad.

ZRY

[DarkWolf]

OOOOOH ITS SO CUTE AND FUZZY AND WARM, im lonely

[sybon?]

i cant think of anything but kirby right now =x hes so adorible i cant stand it!!!!!!!!!

<_<   >_>

<_<''!!

(notices everyone staring at me...)

well... (someone throws frying pan hitting my head causing me to pass out in the middle of the room)


~random guy

[Shadowling]

9ahem* you are distracting attention away from my POEM!!!!!!        

[sybon?]

forgive  

[Shadowling]

I forgive you

[Voo]

VERY interesting. Requires much thought. (hits Sy on head again)
You have a many faceted personality. Can't wait to read your acceptance speech along with the other winners. As each person gives their speech, introduce another winner, ok? Yes, we have some very talented people here. Almost every one has posted a poem that has given us all a glimpse into their inner soul. I love it!

[Sonnilion]

I like the poam lingling ... no I did not forget the nickname ...

[sybon?]

Ill post the next poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Shadowling]

Actually, it shouldn't requir much thought.

Shadowy creatures=Shadows
Crushing emotions= I'm an empath.

Bu thanks for the support

 -Shadowling

[Voo]

I meant that my answer would require much thought. And my answer to your poem's question is: I totally understand because I share those same feelings and experiences.

[lovenrock243]

i like !! i like!!!

[dark - lady]

OOOOOH ITS SO CUTE AND FUZZY AND WARM, im lonely

poor you,still lonely lol

by the way the poem was great!!!

[ShadowAngel]

wow you're an empath i bet you have lots of headaches

i liked your poem!